Yes, your sentences have approximately the same meaning, ‘he’ entering the room at midnight, in what manner, ‘with the stealth of a cat’, or simply ‘stealthily’, or ‘with the stealth of a cat on the prowl’, a more specific form of the expression relating to the manner of entering. More effective too. You decided to emphasise the expression by successfully modifying it. You also manipulate the sparse ponctuation (,) in one sentence, which will encourage a more sophisticated way of uttering such sentences, like suspension; there is a difference between reading “He, with the stealth of a cat” and “he entered his parents’ room”, it implies a wish to dramatise the action. The final “the stealth of a cat on the prowl “ adds a further intensity to the, ‘he’, the man actually entering the room at midnight with a cat-like movements. Good!
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